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14 Nov 2024

The agenda for today 

I took the day off yesterday. I had to but I’m back at it today. Going to do some work on chapter zero 

Using both psychology and sociology if I can’t find an explanation on one subject I’ll switch to the other 

using just sociology or just psychology is frustrating to me. But I’m doing my research and keeping it entry level.

Chapter one will combine the psychology/sociology with chapter zero so that Locket’s influence is seen

13 Nov 2024

Today’s agenda 

After some sleep I’ll continue on chapter zero. Did a lot of research today.

 I will finish breaking down the biology in chapter zero I see that I missed some. Then work on the baseline which btw is not easy followed by some world building 

12 Nov 2024

The agenda for today 

in order to link psychology I have to summarize the biology in other words I need to “say it in English” 

I will look through the pages and start with what I find easiest 

added to chapter one and chapter zero 

I use X to describe what is either unknown or is interchangeable 

I will create a baseline for the different parts and then summarize it at the end 

the biology will be in italics, the baseline and psychology in bold and world building is going to be in large print 

12 Nov 2024

On the last chapter 

Got the biology all mapped out, that was a lot of work and I thank you for your patience 


To match biology and psychology the first step is to take the biology and strip it of all its details leaving just the baseline structure of information 

11 Nov 2024

Not happy with chapter seven 

Chapter eight is fine but I am finding chapter seven too hard so I’m going to change it to a chapter on chromosomes

got chapter seven done and I’m satisfied now to start chapter nine 

Chapter nine and ten are finished almost done with mapping out the biology 

got chapter eleven finished 

10 Nov 2024

Picking up where I left off 

Starting chapter seven getting the biology down then I’ll start the psychology for chapter zero 

Got chapter seven and eight done and going to get some sleep 😴 I’ll do more in the morning 

10 Nov 2024

Fixed

I fixed the chapter sixteen to add a post war world 

9 Nov 2024

The agenda for today 

Today I will put proper diagrams on my pages and start to map out the biology 

I finished the diagrams now to get started 

I might only get time for the first ten chapters today and will do the rest tomorrow 

I’m currently on chapter six 

chapter six is running longer than expected if I don’t have time to go up to chapter ten tonight I’ll let you know where I left off 

Added a new page called chapter zero 

8 Nov 2024

When it comes to the psychology 

The psychology will start off entry level then get deeper. As Organelle becomes corrupt new mentalities are introduced to see who can thrive vs who will be devastated. Each part of the cell and its programmed cell death has a different combination of mindsets. At the end of each page will be a collection of short stories. Other writers will be welcome to post their versions and leave a link to be contacted 

As for the World Building, reality is shaped by a collection of minds

8 Nov 2024

Update 

Got my pages up and now to add proper diagrams for the parts of cells on each page except for the war I will keep the T Cell diagram up 

decided to add a couple more pages for Organelle post war 

8 Nov 2024

Why did I start over?

I feel I can give you better than just world building based on biology and I’m going to put my all into this 

8 Nov 2024

T Cell Parts

Pseudopods are actually extensions of the cytoplasm

The organism can change the shape of the pseudopod, making it move, appear, and disappear.

The pseudopods are used in movement and as a tool to capture prey.

8 Nov 2024

Working on Organelle’s War

Going to map out the biology for the T Cell 

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8 Nov 2024

Chapter One

Started mapping out the biology for chapter one. It will begin with entry level of some of the parts of the nucleus then switch over to Apoptosis and Necroptosis combining the three to make the plot being that Organelle was once a glorious world but the change in regime caused Organelle to fall. As I use the function of a T Cell to create the war


The structure of the nucleus includes nuclear membrane, chromosomes, nucleoplasm, and nucleolus

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